Chick (Skeleton)

This is chick, my Visual Arts I teachers girlfriend. The left one is my first drawing, and the right one is the second drawing after a week of class. I would have to say that I made a good number of improvements, mainly to detail. Lets go from the top down. In the first image the skull looks like an extra terrestrial and in the second one it looks more correctly shaped. Then we go to the jaw, in the first I kind of just added teeth and just drew it how I remember it looking, now how it actually looks. Next is the neck, as you can see in the first drawing I really didn't care to pay attention to the fact that it has many different pieces, I just wanted to get the drawing done. After that comes the ribcage, which is the same size as the skull, which is incorrect, whereas in the second photo I actually made the ribcage larger than the skull. Finally, is the arms. In the first drawingthe arms are really short, but in the second I drew the arms a little longer and more to proportion. Overall iI think that the second was 378% better than the first.